Driving the Duoro Valley
We start the day before nature’s full sun
Another adventure, we’re on the run
Some call it work but to us it’s quite fun
Around each bend beautiful sites unfold
Each one appears special, each one quite bold
A million stories waiting to be told
Hills high above and valleys far below
River winds gently with consistent flow
When ships pass each other, their horns do blow
The terraced landscape is adorned with vines
Cultivated with love along curved lines
Grapes therein soon fermented into wines
It was a long day with early alarm
Saw something unique at every farm
As the Duoro Valley unveiled its charm
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Image: Pinhão, Portugal — View of Duoro Valley from our lunch table at Casal de Loivos, October 12, 2021 (aka Day 29 of 42 Days On The Iberian Peninsula)
Linked to dVerse – Poetics –Pounding the Pentameter!, where Ingrid is hosting and challenged us to write a poem in iambic pentameter.
Wonderful write and fascinating photo Ron. Both very enjoyable indeed!
I’m glad you enjoyed it Rob
That looks like Happy Valley to me.
You got that right. I think it is close to impossible to not be happy there.
‘A million stories waiting to be told’ …beautiful line
Thanks. That kind of stuck with me too.
This looks magical, Ron: reminds me of Malaga in a way. And great work with the pentameter!
The only things that would have made it more magical would have been a less hazy day and bluer sky.
I love how you share your adventures with us, Ron! Please keep sharing!
-David
I want to write about my adventures, and I want to write poetry. Combining the two seems to be efficient (and I’m convinced I was an efficiency expert in a previous life).
great pentameter Ron, sounds like a rather amazing place to visit, thanks for the vivid pic!
Thanks. I had to work at the pentameter part. Eight beats (four steps) per line seemed more natural to me, although it was fairly easy to insert two syllables per line.
you succeeded well, we all have our own methods for these curly formats 🙂
That’s a truly lovely place and the verse matches it, Ron.
Thanks Punam
You are welcome.
You’ve beautifully captured the sights of the valley, and virtually took us there as well. Applause!
Thanks Beverly
Love how you capture the way the sights unfold in that drive… there is rhythm also in driving.
Your rhyme is quite beautiful and fun to read.
How beautiful ~ both scenery and poetic description!
A beautiful rhythmic journey. (K)
Gorgeous scenery captured in your photo and your lovely poem, Ron. What an inspiring place to drive! <3
Lovely writing, Ron … if I could figure out how to live in Portugal I would be there!
What a wonderful experience Ron.
Photo and writing are a perfect match, Ron!
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