Image: Edward Hopper, Gas, 1940
The Station Manager
This being human is harder than it seems
It didn’t turn out like it did in my dreams
Don’t get me wrong, it’s not a sad song
I’ve got love in my life that keeps me strong
Oh, I may gripe about this and that
But even for strangers I’ll tip my hat
I wouldn’t trade it for the world
In fact, my life has barely unfurled
Yes, I’m here tonight working late
I’m dressed to the nines, I have a date
My beautiful bride will be here soon
The diner awaits us this warm night in June
The lonely town road at dusk is empty
Its solitude seems to taunt and tempt me
The setting sun barely hitting the trees
Branches quiver in the evening breeze
Pump lights glow on my hands as they toil
As I pass the time rearranging cans of oil
Turn off the pumps and close up the store
Pegasus light goes off and I lock the door
I hear her approaching, yep right on time
Smiling as she sees me, oh how sublime
My lady arrives and my heart skips a beat
Without her my life would be incomplete
I take it all back, what I said at the start
This being human is entrenched in my heart
To extend my time here I’ll go the extra mile
The love of my woman makes it all worthwhile
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Image: Edward Hopper, Gas, 1940
I viewed some of the Hopper collection and chose this image. I was so inspired – it told me a story, and it took over my writing, forcing me to tell the story to you. As such, I probably failed the part of the challenge about being metaphor poem, but I got the introduction correct. I blame it on Hopper.
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Linked to dVerse Poets Pub — dVerse — Poetics: The Art of Being Human Kim is hosting Poetics tonight and has challenged us to write a metaphor poem that starts with the words ‘This being human is…’ Kim included Edward Hopper’s Western Motel and a metaphorical poem by Rumi entitled The Guest House for our inspiration.
Published by Spillwords on 06 May 2021.
You have my heart. You carried me on a journey, as usual. 😘😘
Wonderful world building around the Hopper. He’s that kind of artist. People like this ordinary gas station attendant are the salt of the earth and what keeps the whole ball of wax from going into meltdown.
Yes, if I ever feel in need of a prompt, he has a few more paintings waiting for me.
I love that you most often write in rhyme, Ron. It’s my preference, and you do it so well. It’s a pleasant poem, leaving us with a feeling all’s right with the world after all!
Thanks Beverly.
Charming read and nailed the ending! 👏👏
Thanks. I wanted to bring it back to how it began, but then I realized this man’s story had changed from “being hard” and so I needed to reflect that.
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Nice Ron. Life is complicated, but our relationships and love for one another, make us human. Love your ending!
Thanks Dwight, the man in the story is supposedly fictional, but I believe the relationship described is possibly mine.
How nice! Love it!
Wow, what a beautiful love story!
Thanks
“my life has barely unfurled” – great line.
Yes, there is still so much I don’t know
This poem made me smile, especially the ending. I do like a happy ending!
…and they lived happily ever after.
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An enviable romance told so poetically and thoughtfully
Yes, he’s a lucky man.
Awwwwwww…. SO sweet!
And this line is SO positive:
Your positivity made my day, Ron.
Yours,
David
Thanks David. Go forth and unfurl your day.
I love that you viewed some of the Hopper collection before choosing the image and letting it inspire your poem, Ron. Hopper’s paintings are full of stories. You haven’t failed at all but let the prompt take you into the image, and the metaphor found its own way in through the life of the station manager, his friendly attitude when tipping his hat, his diligence in working late even when he has a date. I love the description of the lonely town road and the glowing pump lights, and the conclusion that ‘being human is entrenched in my heart’, with added romance and a happy ending!.
Thanks, and thanks for the prompt. I even subtlety implied they were going to Hopper’s (Nighthawks) diner for their date.
I did spot that Ron!
I enjoyed this rhyming poem. Beautiful! 🙂
Lovely, and full of love.
Hopper paints stories and you’ve captured this one beautifully…a life fueled by love 🙂
Love how a life that first seams simple, turns out to be full and complete… and maybe way better than most.
This is absolutely stellar!! 💝💝
A beautiful ending! Great rhythm!
Oh yes. I feel the same way. Life has its hard moments – a lot of them – but one can only be grateful for the amazing journey – especially when one has love, someone by their side. Loved this, Ron.
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