Image: Edward Hopper, Gas, 1940

The Station Manager

This being human is harder than it seems
It didn’t turn out like it did in my dreams
Don’t get me wrong, it’s not a sad song
I’ve got love in my life that keeps me strong

Oh, I may gripe about this and that
But even for strangers I’ll tip my hat
I wouldn’t trade it for the world
In fact, my life has barely unfurled

Yes, I’m here tonight working late
I’m dressed to the nines, I have a date
My beautiful bride will be here soon
The diner awaits us this warm night in June

The lonely town road at dusk is empty
Its solitude seems to taunt and tempt me
The setting sun barely hitting the trees
Branches quiver in the evening breeze

Pump lights glow on my hands as they toil
As I pass the time rearranging cans of oil
Turn off the pumps and close up the store
Pegasus light goes off and I lock the door

I hear her approaching, yep right on time
Smiling as she sees me, oh how sublime
My lady arrives and my heart skips a beat
Without her my life would be incomplete

I take it all back, what I said at the start
This being human is entrenched in my heart
To extend my time here I’ll go the extra mile
The love of my woman makes it all worthwhile

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Image: Edward Hopper, Gas, 1940

I viewed some of the Hopper collection and chose this image. I was so inspired – it told me a story, and it took over my writing, forcing me to tell the story to you. As such, I probably failed the part of the challenge about being metaphor poem, but I got the introduction correct. I blame it on Hopper.

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Linked to dVerse Poets Pub — dVerse — Poetics: The Art of Being Human Kim is hosting Poetics tonight and has challenged us to write a metaphor poem that starts with the words ‘This being human is…’ Kim included Edward Hopper’s Western Motel and a metaphorical poem by Rumi entitled The Guest House for our inspiration.

Published by Spillwords on 06 May 2021.

33 thoughts on “The Station Manager”

  1. Wonderful world building around the Hopper. He’s that kind of artist. People like this ordinary gas station attendant are the salt of the earth and what keeps the whole ball of wax from going into meltdown.

  2. Beverly Crawford

    I love that you most often write in rhyme, Ron. It’s my preference, and you do it so well. It’s a pleasant poem, leaving us with a feeling all’s right with the world after all!

    1. Thanks. I wanted to bring it back to how it began, but then I realized this man’s story had changed from “being hard” and so I needed to reflect that.

    1. Thanks Dwight, the man in the story is supposedly fictional, but I believe the relationship described is possibly mine.

  3. I love that you viewed some of the Hopper collection before choosing the image and letting it inspire your poem, Ron. Hopper’s paintings are full of stories. You haven’t failed at all but let the prompt take you into the image, and the metaphor found its own way in through the life of the station manager, his friendly attitude when tipping his hat, his diligence in working late even when he has a date. I love the description of the lonely town road and the glowing pump lights, and the conclusion that ‘being human is entrenched in my heart’, with added romance and a happy ending!.

    1. Thanks, and thanks for the prompt. I even subtlety implied they were going to Hopper’s (Nighthawks) diner for their date.

  4. Oh yes. I feel the same way. Life has its hard moments – a lot of them – but one can only be grateful for the amazing journey – especially when one has love, someone by their side. Loved this, Ron.

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