A Love So Strong
Quietly she enters the room
I catch a scent of her perfume
I’m quite lucky to be her groom
Our love does bloom; our love does bloom
She beckons me when drawing near
Her beside me removes all fear
I pray it lasts, many a year
A love so dear; a love so dear
I take notice, she needs no lures
Adventurous as daily tours
Heartache vanquished, she’s all my cures
Our love endures; our love endures
Wanting to make each day last long
Loving her will never be wrong
She is the reason for this song
A love so strong; a love so strong
——
Linked to dVerse Poets Pub — Poetry Form: Monotetra, where Grace is hosting and challenged us to o write a poem in monotetra form.
Monotetra: a poetic form developed by Michael Walker, the monotetra. Here are the basic rules:
- Comprised of quatrains (four-line stanzas) in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of 8 syllables per line
- Each quatrain consists of mono-rhymed lines (so each line in the first stanza has the same type of rhyme, as does each line in the second stanza, etc.)
- The final line of each stanza repeats the same four syllables. This is what makes the monotetra so powerful as a poetic form – the last line contains two metrical feet, repeated.
- This poem can be as short as 1 or 2 quatrains and as long as a poet wishes.
That’s beautiful! A love that is strong is a love that lasts. <3 Gorgeously written, Ron.
Lovely love poem! I especially like the final stanza!
Thanks. yes, it’s my favorite also.
How precious this is. Love the tribute to your relationship:
A love so strong; a love so strong
Oh this is incredibly beautiful and tender, Ron! 💝💝
This is so beautiful and sweet. Feels like a true love song to me, can almost hear the tune. 🌹
A sweet and touching tribute.
Your loved one must have an album of love notes, Ron, you wrote them so eloquently and well. This one is no exception.
Yes I do, and I cherish them all.
Beautiful! It should be a song. It’s just lovely.
A beautiful love poem!
May the couple grows strong and strong and their love in a forever bond……….
Aww! This is so beautiful. How wonderful to have a love so precious.
So precious and utterly lovely, Ron. Simply wonderful.
I hope your wife sees this. How wonderful this poem is. I adore this as words and belief:
“Heartache vanquished, she’s all my cures”
Love conquers all…(and makes me smile) (K)
you can definitely turn this into a love song. beautifully done.
That may be the sweetest sentiment I’ve read in a while, Ron.
<3
David